Writing a Great College Essay

There are many Internet websites offering to assist students in preparing college and scholarship essays. Subsequently, there is a great deal of advice as to what college admissions officers and scholarship providers are looking for in compelling student essays. University of Pennsylvania Professor, Angela Lee Duckworth, has been engaging in research regarding the qualities of successful students, which she refers to as, “Grit.” Many colleges and universities are considering her research as a component of how they assess student essays, particularly students from lower-income backgrounds who have to overcome uncommonly difficulty obstacles. See Professor Duckworth’s comments about “Grit,” which she describes as, “passion and perseverance for very long-term goals, having stamina, sticking with your future— day in or day out, not just for the week, not just for the month, but for years.”

Professor Duckworth also comments on the attributes of high achievement in any field.

Click here for a link is to an essay of a student who expressed such grit in their college essay.

In addition to demonstrating “Grit” in your essays, in my book,Show Me the Money: Scholarships, Financial Aid, and Making the Right College Choice,” I talk about the importance of reflecting the noncognitive variables used by readers of the Gates Millennium Scholars essays:

  • Self-Concept
  • Realistic Self-Appraisal
  • Handling System/Racism
  • Long-Range Goals
  • Leadership
  • Strong Support Person
  • Community
  • Nontraditional Learning

It is important to allow yourself sufficient time to write, review, and re-write your essays many times to ensure that you tell your story in a very compelling way.

How Students are Paying for College

Sallie Mae and its subsidiaries manage or service $234 billion in education loans and administer $38 billion in 529 college savings plans. Members of its Upromise college savings rewards program have earned $625 million to help pay for college. Each year, Sallie Mae publishes a national study of college students and parents, “How America Pays for College.” The2013 report notes:

In 2013, the typical family paid 70 percent of college costs, or an average of $21,178, through the following sources (p. 6):

  • 27 percent through loans
  • 27 percent through parent income and personal savings
  • 11 percent through student income and personal savings
  • 5 percent through money from relatives and friends

Only 30 percent of college costs were covered through grants and scholarships.

To reduce the cost of college (p. 12):

  • 67 percent of families eliminated colleges based on cost at any stage during the research and admissions process
  • 57 percent of students lived at home or with relatives
  • 47 percent of students increased work hours
  • 40 percent of families eliminated schools prior to researching the university
  • 27 percent of students accelerated their course work to spend fewer semesters earning a degree
  • 20 percent of parents increased work hours
  • 20 percent of students from low-income families transferred to a lower cost college

Despite billions of dollars in available scholarships and institutional grants, far too many students and families are failing to engage in the necessary research to guide them toward making the right college choice and applying for scholarships for which students would be competitive candidates.

It is equally important for families to have conversations about the cost of college, earning potential of the degree fields students are interested in pursuing, and value of attending colleges with co-op programs that offer students opportunities to gain workplace experiences that make students more competitive candidates for jobs after receiving their college degree. Clearly, the conversations regarding college and careers must begin long before high school.

Carefully Choose Your Classes, Teachers, and Professors

Since so many college scholarships have an academic component, either as part of the eligibility requirements or as part of the evaluation process, it is important for high school students and current college students to carefully consider classes, teachers, and professors.

In addition to speaking to other students about classes, teachers, and teacher grading policies and philosophies, prior to enrolling in class, you may be able to find out information about the class, teacher, or professor at the following websites:

The ratings should be used as a guide to selecting classes and professors. Consider comments within the context of what you need to be successful and the opportunities to earn the grades necessary to achieve a certain GPA. For example, one of the professors at my son’s college has ratings dating back to 2010. Comments consistently reflected such attributes as, “down to earth and straight to the point, he class is great, she is the bomb, she is extremely passionate, she inspired me.” Whereas the comments for another professor dating back to 2008 were, “his tests are difficult and tricky, very difficult to get a good grade, he made me consider changing my major, very confusing.”

The Great Schools website provides reviews and ratings for elementary, middle, and high schools.

 

 

 

Honors Colleges at HBCUs

Mitchell, Ivy A.Education. Fall2002, Vol. 123 Issue 1, p31. 6p.

The Honors Programs at Historically Black Colleges and Universities (HBCUs) play a significant role in the education of outstanding black students. Even though these students can attend almost any university based on their excellent scores on the SAT, the ACT and also because of their high school grade point average, they are still attracted to HBCUs. The Honors Programs at these schools prepare them to function in the global marketplace. Emphasis is placed on a well-rounded program which includes preparation for graduate school, fellowship and scholarship opportunities, travel and study abroad programs, and community service.

Historically Black Colleges and Universities (HBCUs) were first established in the United States many years ago to meet the educational needs of blacks who were disenfranchised by the predominantly white population of the country. Qualified blacks were prevented from attending colleges and universities both public and private owned and operated by whites. This was so whether the universities and colleges were public or private. Blacks, therefore, had to take charge of educating their own. The first HBCU, Cheyney State University was established in 1837. Over the years, even with competition from the increasing number of white institutions of higher learning, HBCUs have continued to survive and to perform well. At present there are 106 HBCUs devoted to the needs of black students. The last one, Morehouse School of Medicine, was established in 1975.

Although black students can attend any university of their choosing, they continue in large numbers to select HBCUs. With high ACT and SAT scores and with high school grade point averages of more than 3.5, black outstanding students are being sought after by many of the prestigious colleges in the nation. The excellent students enrolling in HBCUs have had the option of attending Ivy League colleges and other top universities but they choose continually to attend HBCUs. Florida Agricultural and Mechanical University, an HBCU, has over the years been competing favorably with Yale and Harvard universities for more National Achievement Scholars-the most academically talented black students graduating from high school. Figure I shows that for three consecutive years 1995-1997 HBCUs attracted more of these scholars than Harvard or Yale–Florida A&M University in 1995 with 59 National Achievement Scholars and again in 1997 with 73 such scholars and Howard University in 1996 with 70 scholars. Figure II shows that between 1994 and 1998 both Howard and FAMU ranked among the top five universities in the nation attracting National Achievement Scholars. FAMU ranked 6th, 5th and 3rd, 5th and 3rd again and Howard was ranked 5th, 3rd, 5th,3rd, and 4th, in the same period. (See Figure 2)

The enrollment of these students in HBCUs indicate that their parents, many of whom were probably educated at one of these institutions, do trust these colleges and universities with the education of their children and expect them to be well educated.

What, therefore, are the programs that are implemented to help prepare these students to function as contributing members of society? This paper discusses the Honors Programs at HBCUs, the challenges for students entering these programs and the important contribution that the National African American Association Honors Programs is making in assisting to prepare these Honor students for life beyond the bachelor’s degree.

The Honors Programs

Price (1998) has stated that the development of any community requires intellectual capital and HBCUs must make available a supply of black intellectuals with doctorates in the intellectual disciplines. To provide doctorates is one of the objectives of Honors Programs at these schools. The programs were created to provide students with a challenging college experience that enhances their university experience. Even though some universities have Honors Colleges–Grambling University, Hampton University, Jackson State University, University of Arkansas at Pine Bluff and Voorhees College are examples–the basic programs are similar. However, the Honors Colleges receive a little more prominence because they have as their administrative head a dean instead of a director. The strengths of these programs lie in the fact that they are committed to nurturing the potential to achieve of the academically-talented students who come to the universities. Self-development. leadership skills, and personal worth are enhanced and the honor students have opportunities to conduct research and exchange ideas in a supportive academic environment.

One of the characteristics of the Honors Programs at these HBCUs is that they offer a sequence of courses that is specifically designed to encourage highly motivated students to think independently and to be creative. The Honors Colloquium and Honors Seminars are examples of these courses. In most of the institutions, programs meet the needs of students in all academic majors whether science, journalism, business, art or theatre. Their program of studies also assists them in becoming mote responsive to community and societal needs through community service.

Admission

In the majority of the Honors Programs at HBCUs, students are admitted at the beginning of the their first semester, using mainly their SAT, ACT scores and their high school GPA (see Table III). Hampton University and LeMoyne Owen College are among the HBCUs that admit students after completing the first semester or 15 hours of course work. Peterson’s Honors Program (1999) and interviews indicate that students are admitted on four criteria—-GPAs, standardized test, scores on the SAT or ACT, and on essay. The following are criteria used for admission in the Honors Programs at HBCUs.

High school grade point average (GPA)---3.0 to 3.5SAT scores---1100 or higherACT scores---20 or higherAn essay

In addition, a committee may meet to decide whether the applicant should be admitted based on the above criteria, an interview and letters of recommendation. Table I shows the requirements of HBCUs and the number of students in the Programs. Southern (800) Jackson State (500), Florida A&M (350), Grambling State (260), and Morehouse College (200) have the largest number of students in the program.

Courses and Faculty

The advantages to the students entering the program are varied. The classes, courses, and faculty lend themselves to success in the various programs. The classes are small and thus are suitable for in-depth discussion and opportunities to delve deeper into topics of interest Most programs have 17-24 hours of honors courses. These are taken during the freshmen and sophomore years. Students receive honors credits in one of three ways. They may take an honors course (small classes limited to honors students), they may take an honors seminar, or they may contract with a professor to receive honors credit. To remain in the program students need to maintain at least a 3.0 GPA. During their junior and senior years the honor students work on their Honors-in-the-Major project or senior thesis. This second phase of the Honors Program has been adopted by almost all of universities that have an honors program.  Alcorn, Grambling and Hampton are among those universities that have an honors thesis or Honors-in-the-Major project. Students, with the help of an advisor, select a topic of interest and work with the professor to complete the thesis before graduation. Courses in research assist them in their writing. The quality of this thesis is such that it also helps to prepare them for graduate work. The faculty is dedicated and they are among the highest skilled. They are researchers and excellent scholars who continually challenge the students. Faculty and scholars from other universities and the community are invited as speakers to the Honors Programs.

Research and Scholarships

Students in the programs have excellent opportunities to participate in research other than their senior thesis. The ability to have close contacts with the professors so that they can pursue their interest lends itself to opportunities for research whether at their home university or through summer internships at other universities.

Many of the students who enter the Honors Program possess such high academic record that they qualify to obtain scholarships. At Florida A&M University many of the Honor students receive Presidential scholarships. These are sponsored by companies such as Ely Lily, IBM, and Nations Bank and are awarded by the president of the university. These include the Life-Gets-Better and the Distinguished Scholars Award. The recipients of these awards have a full scholarship for their entire four years of undergraduate study. In addition, some HBCUs Honors Programs are able, with limited funds, to award partial scholarships to deserving students. The criteria for scholarships in many of the Honors Programs at HBCUs are based on ability and need.

Information on scholarships and fellowships are sent to the Honors Office and students who frequent there have opportunities to receive assistance and guidance in applying for these fellowships. The Truman scholar from Florida A&M University and the Rhodes Scholar from Morehouse were both members of their university’s Honors Programs. The Emerging Leaders Workshop, which shares valuable information on scholarships and fellowships and graduate assistantships for minority students, is held in Virginia each summer and is sponsored jointly by the Truman Scholarship Office, Dupont and Mellon Foundation. Black students who attend this workshop receive valuable information on preparing early for graduate school, preparation of a resume, and how to apply for prestigious scholarships such as the Truman, the Rhodes, the Marshall, and Mellon scholarships.

Travel and Study Abroad

In a survey of 30 incoming freshmen honor students at FAMU, only two of them had the opportunity to travel abroad either on holiday with their parents or with other students. It seems, therefore, that students in the Honors Program at FAMU and perhaps at other HBCUs, have had little opportunities to travel abroad. The Honors Programs provide them with such opportunities. Some Honors Programs such as the one at FAMU have a travel ~ component in which students spend the Spring break in a foreign country. During their one week stay in another country FAMU students learn the language and the culture, while comparing the educational system with that in their own country. They also observe American businesses that have branches in the country visited. FAMU also has a Study Abroad Program in the Dominican Republic and the Honor students at the university have benefited from it. Students in many of the Honors Program travel to countries in Africa to spend a semester, especially the summer semester, studying and learning of the culture of their ancestors. This is especially attractive to the students because they can compare their language and customs with those of the African countries, information which they can share with other honor students upon their return to their individual HBCU.

With the ease of communication and the interdependence of countries, knowledge of a language other than English and the familiarity with the culture of another country are of extreme importance. It is, therefore, imperative for Honors directors of HBCUs to encourage and to assist their students in their preparation to function adequately in the global marketplace by emphasizing language acquisition and travel abroad.

Conferences

There are two major conferences that Honor students at HBCUs can and do attend. The National Collegiate Honors conference (NCHC), and the National African American Association Honors Program Conference (NAAAHP) are widely attended. These conferences serve three main purposes. Students attending are able to interact with other outstanding students, sharing ideas and information; they can present papers; and they can, at the same time, listen to outstanding presentations by their peers and professors. These students can also receive information on scholarships and graduate school.

The NCHC is the umbrella for all Honors Programs both in two year and four year colleges. They have an updated list of all programs in the country whose institutions are members of the organization. The objective of the NCHC is to assist Honors Programs to improve by providing information to the schools, the directors, the faculty and the students. At the conferences held once annually, there are more than 1200 honor students in attendance. Presentation of papers mainly by students and also by a few professors and information and discussions by keynote speakers are some of the highlights of the conference. The National Association of African American Honors Programs Conference, founded in 1991, is an organization whose objective is to promote and to advance honors programs at HBCUs. The directors who met to establish the organization had, among its goals, the following:

To develop, enhance, and support honors programs in all HBCUs.To stimulate and encourage community service and leadership.To sponsor research related to honors education.To advocate the funding of honors programs by federal and stateagencies as well as private organizations.To facilitate the enrollment of African American students in graduateand professional schools.To develop an undergraduate educational environment that promotesscholarship, knowledge, and an appreciation of African-Americanculture as a mirror for understanding other great world cultures.

Through the efforts of the NAAAHP honor students have been able to attend this conference and to present papers. Each year the number of students attending has increased. At the last conference held in Alabama, there were more than 250 participants in attendance. Highlights of the conference included presentations from all disciplines, Model United Nations and a debate competition.

Conclusion

Honors education at Historically Black Colleges and Universities plays an important role in preparing future leaders of this country. There is a severe shortage of black Ph.D.s in America. According to the American Council on Education in a 1993 study (Prestage 1994) African Americans received fewer doctorates in 1992 than in 1991. The Honors Programs at HBCUs must play an important role in reversing this trend since many of the academically talented and high achieving students come through their programs. The graduate of these Honors Programs must be future leaders who have the ability to function in a multicultural society whether in the United States or in another country. They must have knowledge of more than one language and the understanding of other cultures. In addition, they must participate in community service with a desire to making the world a better place for all. The commitment of the Honors Programs at HBCUs will help to achieve these objectives.

Table 1: Honors Programs at HBCUs

Legend for chart:A - College/UniversityB - Public/PrivateC - YearD - Admission RequirementsE - # of Students in Program
Alcorn State UniversityPublic187124ACT/Placement175
Benedict CollegePrivate1869ACT/SAT170
Florida A & M UniversityPublic188727 ACT/1100SAT 3.5GPA350
Grambling State UniversityPublic190121ACT/3.5GPA260
HamptonPrivate1868After 1st semester150
Hinds Community CollegePublic191725ACT/3.25GPA150
Jackson State UniversityPublic1877ACT/SAT500
Kentucky State UniversityPublic188621ACT/65
LeMoyne Owen CollegePrivate1862After 1st semester65
Mississippi Valley State UniversityPublic194620ACT/3.2GPA85
Morehouse CollegePrivate186727ACT/1160SAT200
Norfolk State UniversityPublic19353.0GPA180
Prairie View A&MPublic187827 ACT/1200SAT 3.5GPA80
Southern University and A&M Col.Public188023ACT/1060SAT 3.3GPA800
Spelman CollegePrivate1880SAT/GPA260
Saint PhilipsPrivate18893.3GPA230
University of Arkansas at Pine BluffPrivate18893.3GPA230
Voorhees CollegePrivate189728ACT/1200SAT14
Peterson's Honors Program, 1999

References

National Collegiate Honors Council, (1999}. Honors Programs: Official Guide to the National Collegiate Honors Council. 2nd Edition, Peterson’s Thomson Learning.

Prestage, J. (1994). The National Association of African American Honors Programs (NAAAHP) and the Challenge of Honors Education in Historically Black Colleges and Universities. National Honors Report. 15(1) 44.

Price, G. (1998). Black Colleges and Universities: The Road to Philistia, The Negro Review, 59( 12), 9-21.

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By Ivy A. Mitchell, Ph.D, Associate Professor of Spanish & Director of Honors Program Florida A&M University, Tallahassee, Florida 32307


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Georgia Girls State Program for Juniors

Attention Junior Females, this one is for you!

The Georgia Girls State Program is available for high school junior females.  It requires attending a one-week session on government in June 2014, after which the student will be eligible to  apply for the scholarships listed at the link below.   The website will be updated in January 2014 but to get information on the program and the types of scholarships offered and criteria required to apply, please visit the link below.
http://www.georgiagirlsstate.org/scholarships.htm

 

Reducing “Summer Melt”

“Summer Melt” is a term traditionally used by college admissions officers to describe the phenomenon that students pay a deposit to attend a particular college but do not matriculate at that college the following fall. In The Forgotten Summer: The impact of college counseling the summer after high school on whether students enroll in college, Harvard researchers, Benjamin Castleman an Lindsay Page, provide insight into the percentage of students who, after being accepted into college, fail to actually enroll in any college following high school graduation. Their research identified:

  • 10-20 percent melt nationally
  • 21 percent melt in Boston, MA
  • 22 percent melt in Fulton County Georgia
  • 33 percent melt in Providence, RI
  • 44 percent melt in the Southwest district in Texas

Some of the factors contributing to the failure of students to enroll into college were:

  • Difficulty interpreting award letters and tuition bills
  • Unanticipated costs (e.g., health insurance)
  • Difficulty completing paperwork
  • Lack of access to professional guidance

While the research suggests that schools can do more to support college-bound students during the summer immediately following high school graduation, it also suggests that faith-based and community organizations, fraternities, sororities, coaches, and others who are “connected” to students can play a significant role in guiding and supporting students following high school graduation through to college enrollment. The research caused me to reevaluate our role in the Turner Chapel AME Church Education Ministry. Although we have had a full range of college readiness and financial aid planning initiatives for several years, “Summer Melt” has not been one of the issues we have thought to consider. We have a large number of students who we have guided into college who return to participate in our annual college panel, however, we do not know if there are students who slipped through the cracks during the summer immediately following high school?

We can do more and we are committed to doing more.

Lowest Cost Colleges for Out-of-State Students

Out of state tuition can be as much as 300 percent higher than in-state tuition at many public colleges and universities. The following listing of the ten public universities with the lowest out-of-state tuition rates was taken from U.S. News & World Reports. The cost of these colleges are in stark contrast to the out-of-state tuition cost at the colleges reflected in the second table.

How to Reach Latino and Migrant Families

2013 National GEAR UP Conference

I am grateful to all of the participants who thought it important enough to engage in the conversation regarding strategies to more effectively reach, encourage, and assist Latino and Migrant families in conceptualizing their college-bound plans. I am also grateful for the very kind and insightful evaluations of my session.

Now that you have taken the time to visit our foundation website, please take time to read some of the other blog entries pertaining to working with demographic subgroups, college planning, and scholarship research.

Below are some of the blog entries I believe you will find helpful in your work.

The research pertaining to the anti-deficit framework that I referenced is by University of Pennsylvania Professor, Shaun Harper, Black Male Success in Higher Education.Click here to read my blog entry…

My references to the “college knowledge gap” and some of the research-based challenges facing students from lower income backgrounds are outlined in my blog entry “Informing Low-Income Students About Their College Options.”

The California Opportunity Report: Roadblocks to College provides other useful research information to more fully understand how to be “research-responsive” to the needs of students living in poverty, Hispanic, African-American, and migrant families.

My blog entry, “Gates Millennium Scholars Scholarship” provides more insight into the program and why it is so important that students who meet the eligibility criteria learn about the program as early as possible during their education so that they have the opportunity to earn the GPA and to engage in the type of leadership activities that will make them competitive candidates.

One of the best kept secrets and greatest opportunities for students of color and students from lower income backgrounds are “Diversity Weekends.” My blog entry outlines a variety of Diversity Weekends hosted on the campuses of some of the most selective colleges in the country. Many of the schools provide free transportation, housing, and meals for invited students. These opportunities go the heart of my presentation, i.e., anti-deficit thinking. If you begin from the premise that your students are not performing well enough to be invited to such weekends, then you will miss the importance of talking to them about the opportunity. The goal is share the opportunity and to inspire them to make themselves into a competitive candidate for such opportunities. Click to go to the category on my blog…

Keep in mind that the three keys I spoke about regarding student and family engagement are Inspiration, Information, and Strategies. Your pursuit of these keys should assist you in identifying the consultants, speakers, and messengers who can inspire your students and parents, inform them of what must be done to navigate their way through the very complicated college admissions and financial aid processes, and provide them with the strategies to make the right college match and acquire the necessary financial aid to pay for college.

Finally,click here to download a pdf file of today’s PowerPoint…

Keep in touch and I wish you the best in serving the needs of students and families in your program.

Is a college degree worth the cost?

With the increases in college tuition and trillion dollars in student loan debt students are accumulating to earn their college degrees, there is a lot of debate as to whether a college degree is worth the time, money, stress, and commitment. Although the research is clear regarding the many intellectual, income, career mobility, and societal opportunities that accompany a college degree, there is other research that might guide a different conversation. The PayScale company publishes a ROI or Return On Investment ranking of colleges based on the cost to obtain a degree and the earning potential offered. They rank over 1,000 U.S. colleges and universities to determine the potential financial return of attending each institution given the cost of tuition and the payoff in median lifetime earnings associated with each school.

Some of the schools atop the listing are not surprising, i.e., CalTech, MIT, Stanford, and Harvard. However, other schools may be more surprising, i.e., Harvey Mudd (#1), Polytechnic Institute of New York (#3), and Colorado School of Mines. They profile the ROI by gender, major, and school type. It should also be noted that engineering schools are at the top of the list and schools where graduates pursue such careers as education and social work are at the bottom of the list. However, since it will cost a student and his or her family well over $100,000 to pay for the opportunity to obtain a college degree (whether a student actually graduates or not), knowing the potential return on your family’s investment should be considered in guiding your college choice and your choice of college majors.

Top Engineering Schools

Top Ivy League Schools

Top Liberal Arts Schools

Top State Schools

Needless to say, there are many well-known colleges and universities in the listing of schools with the greatest return on investment. However, there are also many lesser known schools that students and parents may want to take a closer look at when deciding where students will spend the four years of their life after high school and tens of thousands of dollars in the pursuit of a degree and career.

Visit there website…